Saw a girl one day, dressed in blue,
a damsel whose step could brighten life with light true.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in brown,
a beauty who was just fit to wear a crown.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in pink,
which made even the eyes of God to blink.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in yellow,
who liked to stay away from every fellow.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in black,
who was keen to be on the success track.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in green,
warm shoulders that the head could rest and gleam.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in orange,
whose presence in the heart left a feeling strange.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in red,
A charm, seeing which darkness fled.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in purple,
whose smile planted a cute dimple.
Saw a girl one day, dressed in white,
a princess when walked past, the heart took pride.
My dearest girl,
a new ‘YOU’, each day these colors, transformed.
Absolute treat to read!! Beautifully written ππππ
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What an alluring metaphor indeedπππ
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Seems like you had a great time writing it π…… It sounds so well
Amazing work Ravi
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While reading, I felt like this poem should be like a never ending loop ππ So, I re-read it 3 times! Good work π
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Black ππ
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Instant Beautiful and Impressive!
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Beautiful!
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Oh my…I am glad to hear that!!!
Yes, after four long months, I hd the chance to visit my home for a few days…so I was busy with my family.
Although I uploaded some rather small bits these days…
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It is a pleasure to read your posts. Thank youπ
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How beautiful! β€οΈ
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Great work ππ
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Really liked it
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Creative
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This was something different and novel, Ravi. Amazing thought.
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Never felt colors can even be described in this beautiful way. So creative.
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Thanks for the honor
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Looks like your neighbourhood is a great place for a guy to be in.. π Great workβ¦
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Thank u, but the poem is dedicated to one girl in different various colors each day. Wonderful people make any place beautiful π
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So beautifulπ
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Thank you
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That’s a good one, Ravi!
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Thanks Zena for the positive feedback, appreciate it
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Thanks for the valuable feedback.
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